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she sat on her bed
in silence
nowhere,
to go,
no one
to turn to
the only place she has is
the darkness!
Anthony
i look into his eyes
words cant explain
the way i feel
about him
hes
my life
my everything
the best cousin
i could ever have
HiiM
i would stare into his
eyes
as the tears
roll down
his face
im looking
at the man i've never seen before
hes changed
all i can remeber is the day
i told him
that i loved him.
The day after tomorrow
i can feel the sun getting closer
it burns
its hot
to much to handle
i dont want to die
im only 13
my life just begun
i closed my eyes shut
to see what the future
would look like
all i see is a blank page
Comments (7)
julia said
at 7:23 pm on Apr 29, 2009
this is sooo good. but a lil emo lmao ifly!!
mswilliams said
at 11:17 am on Apr 30, 2009
i really like this--keep writing and working on the poem you showed me the other day!
alaysia704 said
at 10:38 am on May 18, 2009
hmm my poems suck
i hate em
feel free to spill the juice lol
xD
chanya said
at 10:38 am on May 18, 2009
i like the first one the most
alaysia704 said
at 10:21 am on May 21, 2009
thanx fribbs
mswilliams said
at 11:24 am on May 27, 2009
I think The Day After Tomorrow is one you should stick with. How did you come up with it? I think you should revise it a little to make each line a little jewel. that sounds weird...lol...but you want each line to really mean something and be memorable. I think overall, the poem rock. But make the details count! nice job!
alaysia704 said
at 2:23 pm on May 31, 2009
thanx Ms.Williams =]
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