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Poetry Ali 704

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every symbol is a letter

every letter makes a word

every word has its meaning

every meaning makes a sentince

every sentence makes a paragraph

every pargraph makes a page

every page makes a chapter

every chapter makes a book

every book makes a library

every library makes a school

every school makes a learning center

every learning center makes a student

 

 

Section Sheet

 

By David Amir and Ali

 

 

 

I would watch the section sheet

 

with your eyes and ears

there is something on it i don't like

about me and my peers

 

I hate it with all my dignaty

that i have

 

OFF TASK, OFF TASK

ou est la section sheet

I need to give ali a B

 

LOUD NOISE

I heard a noise in the hall

i didn't no what to do

so i ran the other way

i didn't have a clue

 

but i didn't really care

so i kept on my quest

wondering what that noise was

but i needed a rest

 

back in the hall

the noise was growing loud

people started to noticed

people started to crowd

 

i thought about the noise

and i thought i knew what it was

so i ran back to school

running from the fuzz

 

i thought i was going to be a hero

that everything would be okay

but it turned out

it wasn't my day

 

some little red headed girl scott 

spoke out over the crowd

she said i know what it is

her voice strong and loud

 

she walked to the empty closet

and opened the creaky door

turned on the inside light

showing something on the floor

 

a little baby chipmunk

was lying in the light

her fur was brown and fluffy

her eyes could glow at night

 

we heard the noise again

a weird high pitch moan

stuck under some books

her mother there alone

 

the red headed girl

picked up the mom

brought her to the baby

and started to sing a song

 

that little red headed girl

got to save the day

so here's to the little red headed girl

hip-hip hooray!

 

 

EPIC FAILURE

I try really hard

and don't get anything

so what is the point

 

I waste time

so do you

so why do we still try

 

I get so close

but i fall so hard

so what keeps me going

 

I wish a lot

they never come true

I wish some more

 

And really all I 

feel like is an

EPIC FAILURE

 

EXIT AND ENTRANCE

theres an entrence and a exit

in every building I know

To come in to come out

And to leave on the go

 

When an emergency comes up

and the lights are out

a red exit sign appears

so you don't have to shout

 

When you need to get in

to an inside place

and entrance is there

so you can come in with grace

 

It can be one door

or two or three

but entrances and exits

are just right for me

 

 

One day I saw a duck

It did die I don't ne why

I soon saw the duck in heaven

What just happened to me this morning

I drank a big cup of coffee

and I walked ou t of my house

I fell to the floor laughing histeracley

It turned out I hit my head

when I woke up from my bed

An angle came and picked me up

With her white wings and pick-up truck

I will never forget that nasty hit

And I hate to say it I bit my lip

 

 

 

I wake up at 8 am

groggy, tired

look in the mirrior

to see my hair

looking like a birds nest

 

fix it up

and run down stairs

to see my breakfest on the table

eat!

next put on my socks

slip my untieded shoes on

 

Run out of my house

forggeting to shut the door

again

 

I run down the street

almost getting hit by the cars

as I j-walk ina two way street

 

hop on the bus

 

I look at the red brick building

that looks like a jail

and walk in

almost late

ScHoOl

 

I get knocked around in the hallway

yelled at in the classes

LuNcH

I run around

friends Laughs

School ends with the bell

that little annoying sound

That usually makes  you feel sick

just saved your life

 

I run up to 7th avenue

and go into the smelly doctors office

the air is thick

full of sickness

I wait

Waiting

SItting next to this old person

with a disgustign cough

I go in to the doctors office

and the doctor

pushes one shot in to me arm

hard

then another

another one

and then one more for good luck

4 shots

I run out the office and walk over

to my dentist

he looks at my teeth

I walk out

say

"my dad will call you, thanks"

and with the tip of thomas

I'm off

speeding down the street

to my house

I run to my new macbook computer

open it up

check to see if anything happened on Facebook

3 minutes of relaxation !!

I pick up my heavy bookbag

throw it on my bed

and start doing my homework

S.S

French

Math

E.L.A

Science

all of it whizzing around my head

5:55

SHIT

I run to the laundry room

and get my soccer stuff

on

out the door by

6:05

I get hoome at 9:30

shower

eat

do the homework I didn't finish

BED

Sleep!

I wake up at 8 am

groggy, tired

look in the mirrior

to see my hair

looking like a birds nest

 

fix it up

and run down stairs

to see my breakfest on the table

eat!

 

 

Revlection

My poem started out when I was walking in the sreet I was thinking about how busy my day was I was thinking that I would need to do my E.L.A homework and then my mind just kind of put them together.  Like in club penguin when your a secerete agent and you have to put the rope and the stick togeather to make a fishing rod.  I ended up liking this poem.  It's different then my normal style of writing.

I just started to write it, that's how I devoloped it.

 

Intension

 I wanted people (teachers espesialy) to see that when they give us homework, it's not just us doing that Homework  plus other teachers homework plus after school activities.  And how busy peoples lives can be.  I think that a lot of people can relate to this.  I mean like a lot of peoples lives are busy. Sometimes I cna't finish all of my homework, sometimes I can't go to soccer.  Sometimes I'm so sick of going one place to another place.  I can't do anything.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Comments (2)

mswilliams said

at 11:06 am on Apr 30, 2009

nice ideas ali keep writing

mswilliams said

at 9:14 am on May 22, 2009

Ali i think the last poem you have here is one to work on and develop. There is a great idea and a structure that really works. There is something frantic about the one lines that read "LUNCH" or "School" like you're in a hurry. Try and finish that poem out and revise it, it's really nice.

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