every symbol is a letter
every letter makes a word
every word has its meaning
every meaning makes a sentince
every sentence makes a paragraph
every pargraph makes a page
every page makes a chapter
every chapter makes a book
every book makes a library
every library makes a school
every school makes a learning center
every learning center makes a student
Section Sheet
By David Amir and Ali
I would watch the section sheet
with your eyes and ears
there is something on it i don't like
about me and my peers
I hate it with all my dignaty
that i have
OFF TASK, OFF TASK
ou est la section sheet
I need to give ali a B
LOUD NOISE
I heard a noise in the hall
i didn't no what to do
so i ran the other way
i didn't have a clue
but i didn't really care
so i kept on my quest
wondering what that noise was
but i needed a rest
back in the hall
the noise was growing loud
people started to noticed
people started to crowd
i thought about the noise
and i thought i knew what it was
so i ran back to school
running from the fuzz
i thought i was going to be a hero
that everything would be okay
but it turned out
it wasn't my day
some little red headed girl scott
spoke out over the crowd
she said i know what it is
her voice strong and loud
she walked to the empty closet
and opened the creaky door
turned on the inside light
showing something on the floor
a little baby chipmunk
was lying in the light
her fur was brown and fluffy
her eyes could glow at night
we heard the noise again
a weird high pitch moan
stuck under some books
her mother there alone
the red headed girl
picked up the mom
brought her to the baby
and started to sing a song
that little red headed girl
got to save the day
so here's to the little red headed girl
hip-hip hooray!
EPIC FAILURE
I try really hard
and don't get anything
so what is the point
I waste time
so do you
so why do we still try
I get so close
but i fall so hard
so what keeps me going
I wish a lot
they never come true
I wish some more
And really all I
feel like is an
EPIC FAILURE
EXIT AND ENTRANCE
theres an entrence and a exit
in every building I know
To come in to come out
And to leave on the go
When an emergency comes up
and the lights are out
a red exit sign appears
so you don't have to shout
When you need to get in
to an inside place
and entrance is there
so you can come in with grace
It can be one door
or two or three
but entrances and exits
are just right for me
One day I saw a duck
It did die I don't ne why
I soon saw the duck in heaven
What just happened to me this morning
I drank a big cup of coffee
and I walked ou t of my house
I fell to the floor laughing histeracley
It turned out I hit my head
when I woke up from my bed
An angle came and picked me up
With her white wings and pick-up truck
I will never forget that nasty hit
And I hate to say it I bit my lip
I wake up at 8 am
groggy, tired
look in the mirrior
to see my hair
looking like a birds nest
fix it up
and run down stairs
to see my breakfest on the table
eat!
next put on my socks
slip my untieded shoes on
Run out of my house
forggeting to shut the door
again
I run down the street
almost getting hit by the cars
as I j-walk ina two way street
hop on the bus
I look at the red brick building
that looks like a jail
and walk in
almost late
ScHoOl
I get knocked around in the hallway
yelled at in the classes
LuNcH
I run around
friends Laughs
School ends with the bell
that little annoying sound
That usually makes you feel sick
just saved your life
I run up to 7th avenue
and go into the smelly doctors office
the air is thick
full of sickness
I wait
Waiting
SItting next to this old person
with a disgustign cough
I go in to the doctors office
and the doctor
pushes one shot in to me arm
hard
then another
another one
and then one more for good luck
4 shots
I run out the office and walk over
to my dentist
he looks at my teeth
I walk out
say
"my dad will call you, thanks"
and with the tip of thomas
I'm off
speeding down the street
to my house
I run to my new macbook computer
open it up
check to see if anything happened on Facebook
3 minutes of relaxation !!
I pick up my heavy bookbag
throw it on my bed
and start doing my homework
S.S
French
Math
E.L.A
Science
all of it whizzing around my head
5:55
SHIT
I run to the laundry room
and get my soccer stuff
on
out the door by
6:05
I get hoome at 9:30
shower
eat
do the homework I didn't finish
BED
Sleep!
I wake up at 8 am
groggy, tired
look in the mirrior
to see my hair
looking like a birds nest
fix it up
and run down stairs
to see my breakfest on the table
eat!
Revlection
My poem started out when I was walking in the sreet I was thinking about how busy my day was I was thinking that I would need to do my E.L.A homework and then my mind just kind of put them together. Like in club penguin when your a secerete agent and you have to put the rope and the stick togeather to make a fishing rod. I ended up liking this poem. It's different then my normal style of writing.
I just started to write it, that's how I devoloped it.
Intension
I wanted people (teachers espesialy) to see that when they give us homework, it's not just us doing that Homework plus other teachers homework plus after school activities. And how busy peoples lives can be. I think that a lot of people can relate to this. I mean like a lot of peoples lives are busy. Sometimes I cna't finish all of my homework, sometimes I can't go to soccer. Sometimes I'm so sick of going one place to another place. I can't do anything.
Comments (2)
mswilliams said
at 11:06 am on Apr 30, 2009
nice ideas ali keep writing
mswilliams said
at 9:14 am on May 22, 2009
Ali i think the last poem you have here is one to work on and develop. There is a great idea and a structure that really works. There is something frantic about the one lines that read "LUNCH" or "School" like you're in a hurry. Try and finish that poem out and revise it, it's really nice.
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