Pretty
Oblivious
to the embarassment,
I was as happy as can be.
I didn't, care that my hair
stuck up.
Or that my teeth were blue.
As long as I had
that dresss on.
I had all
the power
in the world.
Embarrasment was below me,
perfection was unessesary,
And makeup,
would never be as
beautiful as me.
Becasue I was happy
and that's all I cared.
In the darkness
of reality.
I would soon realize
that my hair was
Higher than my bow,
and that my teeth,
were blue.
So I'd,
put some makeup on
and use some gel.
Then I'd be
pretty,
but never as beautiful
as when my teeth were blue.
Gas planet Superstar
When your
falling into the
black hole.
The moon and the sun
stand on the edge of it.
Their tears
fall on your face, as your falling.
Only,
there not looking at you.
They're lookking straught ahead.
Waiting for Jupeter and mars,
to come and tell them
how
good they are.
Because they don't care
about you.
You're a gas planet
not a superstar.
Bore
once you're with us
its hard to save yourself.
At first
it's tough,
you don't want us,
but once you see the beauty of it,
you relax.
A gas seeeps into body.
you're heavy like a cloud.
Untill someone
can save you
we'll suck you deeper.
But if no one saves you,
you will know
that no one cares.
Comments (2)
averyh704 said
at 4:48 pm on May 18, 2009
Awwwwwwwwwwwweeeeeeeeeeeeeessssssssssssssssssssoooooooooooooooooommmmmmmmmmmmmeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Avery, uve got talent!!!!!! really, im not lying. and maybe, when your famous you can remember me out of all of those screaming fans and stuff. Cause we both know that you will right? anywyay, Love e'm! Truly, from your favorite six grader of all time, Thai : )
mswilliams said
at 9:14 am on May 22, 2009
Hmm. Gas Planet Superstar is a great poem. Where did you get the idea for it? I think it's interesting that you give planets human thoughts and ideas. I think you should consider publishing it as one of your final poems for the unit!
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