Poetry
simple,
a deeply written form
of a secret language
anonymous,
a dreamer,
writing down his thoughts,
he won't forget,
the secret kept inside the poem,
because it is simply
nothing.
Gross Stuff
Destroy it,
Burn it,
as i see it laying on the surface,
of the silver coldness,
i do not want
to even glance at this vegetable
,
ever
ever
again
I don't even like green anymore,
this bushy thing is burning my eyes,
can't they bring a bunch of flies,
to eat it all?
I am about to fall,
soon im gonna faint,
ew..
broccoli
Intelligence
Consider analyzing your thoughts,
even if you know it isn't possible,
because you aren't smart,
no, not at all
even if you think you are,
we all know you cannot think,
your thoughts bring you down,
not to mention your brain,
can it get any smaller?
i can't even think
about the others,
the pain they go through,
living with an idiot like you...
HAHAHAHAHAH! i wrote this poem because i think it makes me sound smart =p! it includes words like analyze and consider and im decribing what this poem states to not be me. (does that make sense?) this poem is truly one of the poems that i actually think i succeeded on writing. Most of my other poems have a deeper meaning, but this one... this one is simply a poem someone would write to make themselves sound smart and someone else sound dumb. That's the whole point of writing this poem. its supposed to be really funny and worth reading.=]]]]
Fiction isn't for real
Do we really know reality?
or is it just a mere thought,
my friend.
those people,
my friends who stand next to me
everyday
and know,
i am me.
No changing
no going back
you can't change who i am,
no,no
they understand,
there are complications
in this world
no gradual perfection,
even between friends,
But do they really show this?
Do they really?
no.
They only know
the perfections
no mistakes
only friends,
only them,
can fix the way
of your life.
to make it
unbelievable.
Hello
Hello again,
it's so nice to see you
i see you've aged
during the past few
years.
you're kinda old ,
i don't know if you've noticed,
but you are,
that's no lie...
i imagine you are living
in san francisco
with your wife,
and kids,
and a few pets
well... not really
i feel that your are a
lonely person,
living alone
in an abandoned warehouse.
but you know what?
i'm only saying hello,
it was nice seeing you once again
good-bye
I think this poem was the poem that i decided to write because i had no other objective to write about. But now that i have written it, it really does make sense in a way, This poem is dedicated to the people that are living in an abonded warehouse, somewhere in the world, without a family to go to . I think this poem reminds us that we need to cherish everything in our lives that we have. i mean, were not hobos are we? we are simply living a great life compared to them. We have food on the table every single day, we have a bed at home to sleep in, we have someone to talk to when we are unhappy. We are simply not like them, and we should be happy about that. So what if you're no living on the upper east side in a condo designed by a famous architect? at least you have a warm, comfy home where you could stay at.
Live Life & Love <3
the world will turn on its axis
and you will feel that turn
in the point
where you feel your life
is ending.
life is an
untitled story
written by one person
who knows the story well enough
to write it down.
that person is only you,
you are the one
holding your own future
in your own hands.
don't be afraid to risk anything,
because in the end,
you'll figure it out
and it will end up
being for the better good.
intention: i think i wrote this poem because i think that when you're close to the end of your life you then finally realize the things and people you love. just imagine... right now, are you thinking about your parents or your sister or brother? probably not. But when you're older you are entitled to care about the poeople you knew your whole life. Every person you know that is related to you, or a very good friend, understands if you do a mistake. If your friends were really in a bad situation, you wouldn't just dump them and leave, you'd have to help them out. I think that's why this poem means so much to me. It really describes the connections being made between somone close to you and yourself. The sun does not revolve around the earth, the earth revolves around the sun. That's how life is; life does not revolve around one person who is just there, it revolves around everyone, forming the human race.
I Surely Don't Care
mock me,
i dare you,
this isn't a joke,
im serious,
repeat the words i say
in that language everyone hates,
and i won't hate you,
because it's something i've told you to do,
mock me,
i really don't care,
unless you're a chicken,
and don't take the dare,
then i might mock you,
which isn't so pleasant,
i am THE most insulting person
to ever enter the planet,
so mock me,
i surely don't care,
because i dared you,
and you were supposed to listen.
Comments (3)
mswilliams said
at 10:59 am on Apr 30, 2009
Nice work!
mswilliams said
at 11:17 am on May 21, 2009
"Live Life & <3" is great. there is a really nice idea behind that poem. I think the images you use really work, too--that you start with the world spinning and move to just you writing your story. One thing i'll suggest is maybe cutting out some repeated words. Like for example, say "The world will turn on its axis/and you will feel it" etc.Just an idea. :)
elena said
at 10:39 am on May 28, 2009
Oh my God !
I <3 ur poemss
I didn't get 2 finish, but I <3 the one called hello. (:
its so true.
kay g2g ; monitors off lmao <333
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