word by word
stanza by stanza
the limitations in this world
can all be removed
simply
by 6 words
i want to write a poem
it's as easy as that
if you know the right words
the flow of time
past
so fast
present
so slow
future
i don't know
familiar
deja vu
stranger
i dunno
similar
maybe
different
am i supposed to know?
simplicity
could be
different
im no genius
maybe
hands clenched tightly
people hover
like humming birds
fighting
for the last
bit of nutrition
before the piercing
cold
their wings blur
you fake a smile
but you really want to-
get everything to start
the wings flash faster
it's not that big of a deal
but
somehow
right now
it seems
like it is
like it's
a really big deal
maybe it's the cameras
maybe it's the smiling humming-bird-people
maybe it's the plastic bar over your head
you don't know
maybe
where bat?
where do the ones engulfed in tradegy go? (The Underland Series)
do you know why snow is white?
because it has forgotten what color it ought to be
such a sad color
don't you think?
but black's even sadder
you know why?
because it swallows you whole
it blinds you
how do i know?
because ive seen
someone dear to me
swallowed by such hatred
it wasnt that she wanted to be
swallowed
but she was anyway
the hatred stripped her
till she was nothing but a skeleton
hanging momentarily
in the air
oblivious to all shouts
before crashing to her doom
stripped into nothing
similar to her former self
in the midst of this
an innocent voice asks
unknowingly
where bat?
Reader's Response (Poem)
take it easy
but open up
when it's right
cause if you go too long
unopened
you'll soon forget
how
give what you wanted
dont take the easy route
cause theres a easier route
with lots more
jive
The forbidden three
gray looms over
like an ominous cloud
rain begins to drizzle
the streets are bare
and gray
the sidewalks
overturned
the houses
abandoned
this city where no one wanders
it rains everyday
from dawn
to dusk
three small figures
crowd
in an abandoned house
shivering
and hungry
one has loving eyes
one has fearful eyes
one has a dream
to rid this city
of the tears
that have rained down
for as long
as anyone can remember
and one more
to rid this
pitiful world
of war
a big dream
indeed
it would be a miracle
if it could
one day
become reality
but with what sacrifiice?
the rain drizzles down endlessly
like the pain
that has poured continually
never ceasing
on the threesome
the pain
that only they know
they try to rid of
with just one goal
the fight
for their survival
gradually
their innocence fades
as the cruelty
swallows them whole
rain
pain
is there a difference?
if so
what is it?
when will the rain cease?
if it ceases
one place
there is really
only one place
the living go
when they die
it's not a good place
it's not a bad place
just like the living world
but it is empty
not dark
not cold
simply empty
no matter what
it's the same place
no heaven
no hell
it's just one place
and they stay there
some of them
disappear
in time
no one knows
how much
because no one
thought to bring
a watch
are they reborn?
i dont know
no one ought to tell me
they just come and go
they probably wont remember
this place
and that's probably for the best
they wont remember me either
im just someone
who's there
the country that awaits destruction
this is a very
sad country
no
i dont suppose you could call it sad
misfortunate
may be
a better description
it never rains
it drizzles
it never snows
it hails
it never shines
it glows
a dark, gloomy glow
like a inevitable omen
there is always
silence
in the air
a tense feeling
of the coming destruction
waiting
and waiting
for something
anything
to happen
it's been
a really long time
since this country
if it can even
be called a country
began waiting
for its destruction
perhaps
even longer
than its existance
not an angel
she roams
the world
the galaxy
around
and around
numerous times
in a trailing
torn
white robe
a cloak of the dark
surrounds her
like an omious cloud
her footsteps are invisible
she looks as if not seeing
hears as if not hearing
smells as if not smelling
tastes as if not tasting
feels as if not feeling
her empty eyes
gaze at you
but she doesnt see you
she sees something else
something not of this world
traveling mindlessly
as if searching for something
searching for something she doesnt know
but she needs it
and she wont find it
cause it's not here
it's not anywhere
it's already gone
but she must keep searching
for if she gives up
like the rest
she fears
it will really disappear
people say she's an angel
but she knows
she's not angel
she's someone
who has
unknowingly
released
all she ever had
and now
she desperately
tries to get it back
unable to evade
a puppet
is an eternal companion
it cannot die
when it breaks
it is fixed
a puppet
is able
to maintain
its image
for an infinity
or more
years
that is
the beauty
of a puppet
and with that beauty
there is a sadness
uncomparable
i will only betray the world like how it has betrayed me
deeper
and deeper
into that core
called 'void'
sucked slowly
into that
black hole
unable
to climb out
sinking
deeper
and deeper
unable to regret
unable to change
any longer
until we
can only
betray this world
like how it
has betrayed us
an illness
only death
can cure
the hand that has let go of everything of value
i watched
clutching cold bars
as a shadow faded
within the flakes
of falling snow
disappearing within
the bare trees
without a single leaf
of winter
these coldly iron bars
that prison me
i will stay
here
not this, not that
have you ever wondered
what it is?
not this
not that
slowly fading
from existence
as the sun glimmers
through
darkened clouds
melting gray
in the pavement
Intention:
well i dont really understand what i was intending on here because my poems are really kinda random. developed from my random ideas i happened to come across on some random day. this poem really just demostrates how so many lives/lights disappear from the world everyday and how nobody may know they ever existed in the first place. i mean, they are already gone but this way, it seems as if they really are gone. like they were never here in the first place. they dont know who they are and nobody can tell them cause they disappeared. and thats just too sad. if no one knows them maybe they really never existed. its jus kinda this meaning enveloped in some mist. if you ponder on it for awhile- you'll find it. you wont have to think for like a hour cause it's not really that complicated. just a few minutes or so.
the silence
looms throughout
the air
all engrossed
in their own
worlds
truly
i question
i dont really understand
do i?
math
ela
social studies
science
foreign language
i question
why they invented
such things?
couldnt we
all just
live in peace?
for as long
as time will allow
why
must we
greet these
uneeded complications?
in the end
they just might
lead to our own destruction
an eternal
simple
life
a limited
complicated
life
theres simply
nothing
we can do
no
we can
but its already
too late
we wont
one big fat lie
when it all ends
all its gonna be
is one big fat lie
cause theres
gonna be
no one
to remember
its all just
one big fat lie
everything
just keeps on lying
not to each other
its to themselves
they cant help it
its just the way they are
they continue dreaming
keep dreaming
until not a speck remains
you would be scattered
in the wind
but there is
no wind
enveloped in dreams
in order to prevent
your destruction
it is the dreamers whom
are punished the most
i read that on a advertisment
on a glass display
i saw
one day
going home
punished again
and again
Reader's Response (Poem)
the air
is warm
almost suffocating
the sun glows
onto the morning dew
a bird chirps
'good morning!'
someone wakes
walking down the
bare streets
sleepily
pajamas trailing
rubbing his eyes
in an effort
to wake
walking deeper
into an
enveloping mist
ignorant
into an unknown
world
entranced
and made unconscious
by the sweet
exotic
fragrances
that taints the air
like poison
slowly seeping
into the body
reaching the heart
til the person
is too faint
to stand
slowly into
an abandoned
dimension
where no one dwells
a hand
lures him in
floating gently
as if he
can take over
the entire world
by just
flicking a finger
power
they are so easy
so easy to trick
a car screeches
to a stop
a door slams open
people gather
fearful expressions
concerns
light gossips
whom will be next?
why?
what lies
before the car
is a deformed body
deformed by poison
leaving no trace
of its existence
what is left
is only
a parched skeleton
amidst the red lights
a hand returns
to its dwelling
a child catches sight
of a single
tear
sparkling
like the only star
in a night sky
melancholy
the child thinks
she has never
heard of that word
before
yet
in this minute
she seemingly
understands it
better than anyone
ever will
crying tears
she wonders
how odd
why am i crying?
a language must not be invented
claws reaching out
to grasp
whatever it can
in fear
of being alone
nothing is familiar
is anything
is familiar
everything is strange
cold
indifferent
wandering
in desperate search
of something
even if its only
the slightest bit
familiar
a desperate search
for home
the home
that exists no longer
abcdefghijklmnopqrstuvwxyz
philosophers
think about it?
there is no
such need
you live
so you live
you die
so you die
do you know
there is not
many philosophers
nowadays?
blow
blow wind
blow
twirl the leaves
rustle the people
blow across
the barren landscape
we call
'home'
running
flying
as it
is your last blow
not too long
will it truly
be completely
barren
let us hope
you will not
be caught
for we wish
we wish you
to carry our ashes
as you always
have
be kind
wind
xxxxx
a symbol
of death
24th
letter
of the alphabet
even as innocent
as X_X
in the eyes
of evil
cartoon characters
what does
it mean
to have
5 x's
lined up
like this
xxxxx
quadripple death
5 alphabets
or the death
of innocence?
Comments (3)
mswilliams said
at 10:59 am on Apr 30, 2009
Nice, Grace. I think your short lines are really effective.
grace said
at 10:37 am on May 18, 2009
my poemz r s/w pessimistic o-o
mswilliams said
at 9:11 am on May 22, 2009
I think the Reader Response poem really works. There is a structure to it--like "something does something." It really works nicely. Maybe try using a structure in the other poems? Just an idea. Overall i think your poems are great
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