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Poetry Jazmin 704

Page history last edited by Jazmin 2 years, 12 months ago

 

 

TRUTH

 

Why do people think they are so loved?

When they are hated

Why do people try so hard to please others?

Why do they think, if they are approved...

They will fell better

The truth

is

plain

and

simple

It wont give them satisfaction

until

they aprove

themselves.

 

WHY DO I CARE

 

Why do i care

about the clothes i wear

if my hair looks good

or if it looks like i live in the hood

Why do i care

if you like me or not

if i spent alot of money on what i bought

why do i care about what you think?

 

 

28 WAYS TO DESCRIBE YOU

 

Hypocite

Oblivious

Self-absorbed

Annoying

Afraid confused

Idiot

Unfair

conceded

Liar

Sad

Fake

Insecure

Scary

Unhappy

Shallow

Follower

Hater

Mean

Cruel

Selfish

Flakey

Unhappy

Stupid

Back-Stabbing

Lazy

Gulible

Materialistic

BITER!!!!!

 

 

HOW COULD YOU

 

 

do you remember when i confided in you?

do you remember when i cried to you?

of course you do

how couldn't you?

now you use it in ways i can't beilve

now your conceded and freakishly mean

how could you

hurt me so bad

and think i would not be mad

how could you lie in my face

and say i am a disgrace?

how could you act like your innocent

and think that you are perfect?

how could you make me feel unworthy, worthless and like a loner?

 

DO YOU REMEMBER

 

Do you remember

When we we used to make mud pies

There were no worries, no cries

Do you remember

When we spent all day singing along to

sesime street

and tickling each others' feet

Do you remember

when you didn't care

about your hair

Or didn't give a crap

about what you would wear

I do

But now theres nowhere to hide

and i pushed that life aside

And once and a while

I will act like its okay

but i remember

 

HOW ABOUT?

How about we take a long walk in the park

How about we lick ice cream

and

laugh

non stop.

How about we pretened that

there are no problems

and everyone is happy...

How about we do that...just for today.

 

THAT RED DRESS

 

I wore that red dress as much as  i could

and maybe evem more than i should

That red dress made me smile

And i planned on wearing it for a while

Soon i grew older and that red dress

stayed the same

It remains in the back of my closet

while i carry on with the rest of my

life

 

 

SOMETIMES

 

Sometimes I wish i could fly away

Sometimes I may even cause a fray

Sometime I feel like no one knows

Sometimes i wish

i would never grow

Sometimes i think that  I am free

But then I remember

who I am supposed to be.

 

 

I DON'T CARE

 

You really don't understand...

I don't care what you call me

or how you want me to look

I don't care if i am not pretty... in your book

I dont care if my hair is nice or if I dont apeal you

You really don't get it..

there's nothing that you can do

to make me care

to make me want to change

its kinda funny

You'll keep trying...but

I WIN. because I don't care

 

 

 

 

 

 

Comments (8)

Jazmin said

at 8:49 pm on May 9, 2009

WHAT IS THIS????

maitreya said

at 10:34 am on May 18, 2009

lol no comments.

Jazmin said

at 10:37 am on May 18, 2009

ew SHUT UP!!!!

Jazmin said

at 10:18 am on May 21, 2009

i feel like a lonererrr

adam said

at 10:22 am on May 21, 2009

u do care thats the thing

adam said

at 10:27 am on May 21, 2009

U realize all your poems start off happy and turn tough or depressed at the end. Also maybe sometimes you should answer your questions cause it seems like all of them are a poem with no answer

mswilliams said

at 9:04 am on May 22, 2009

hi jazmin! I think you're doing a really nice job with your poems so far. One thing I'll suggest is thinking about rhymes--you have some really good ones that stand out and work really well, but we want to make sure the words we choose to rhyme really fit in the poem, you know? Like in sometimes--"cause a fray"...I dunno just a suggestion. Nice job overall :)!

Jazmin said

at 10:25 am on Jun 1, 2009

... adam.....

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