TRUTH
Why do people think they are so loved?
When they are hated
Why do people try so hard to please others?
Why do they think, if they are approved...
They will fell better
The truth
is
plain
and
simple
It wont give them satisfaction
until
they aprove
themselves.
WHY DO I CARE
Why do i care
about the clothes i wear
if my hair looks good
or if it looks like i live in the hood
Why do i care
if you like me or not
if i spent alot of money on what i bought
why do i care about what you think?
28 WAYS TO DESCRIBE YOU
Hypocite
Oblivious
Self-absorbed
Annoying
Afraid confused
Idiot
Unfair
conceded
Liar
Sad
Fake
Insecure
Scary
Unhappy
Shallow
Follower
Hater
Mean
Cruel
Selfish
Flakey
Unhappy
Stupid
Back-Stabbing
Lazy
Gulible
Materialistic
BITER!!!!!
HOW COULD YOU
do you remember when i confided in you?
do you remember when i cried to you?
of course you do
how couldn't you?
now you use it in ways i can't beilve
now your conceded and freakishly mean
how could you
hurt me so bad
and think i would not be mad
how could you lie in my face
and say i am a disgrace?
how could you act like your innocent
and think that you are perfect?
how could you make me feel unworthy, worthless and like a loner?
DO YOU REMEMBER
Do you remember
When we we used to make mud pies
There were no worries, no cries
Do you remember
When we spent all day singing along to
sesime street
and tickling each others' feet
Do you remember
when you didn't care
about your hair
Or didn't give a crap
about what you would wear
I do
But now theres nowhere to hide
and i pushed that life aside
And once and a while
I will act like its okay
but i remember
HOW ABOUT?
How about we take a long walk in the park
How about we lick ice cream
and
laugh
non stop.
How about we pretened that
there are no problems
and everyone is happy...
How about we do that...just for today.
THAT RED DRESS
I wore that red dress as much as i could
and maybe evem more than i should
That red dress made me smile
And i planned on wearing it for a while
Soon i grew older and that red dress
stayed the same
It remains in the back of my closet
while i carry on with the rest of my
life
SOMETIMES
Sometimes I wish i could fly away
Sometimes I may even cause a fray
Sometime I feel like no one knows
Sometimes i wish
i would never grow
Sometimes i think that I am free
But then I remember
who I am supposed to be.
I DON'T CARE
You really don't understand...
I don't care what you call me
or how you want me to look
I don't care if i am not pretty... in your book
I dont care if my hair is nice or if I dont apeal you
You really don't get it..
there's nothing that you can do
to make me care
to make me want to change
its kinda funny
You'll keep trying...but
I WIN. because I don't care
Comments (8)
Jazmin said
at 8:49 pm on May 9, 2009
WHAT IS THIS????
maitreya said
at 10:34 am on May 18, 2009
lol no comments.
Jazmin said
at 10:37 am on May 18, 2009
ew SHUT UP!!!!
Jazmin said
at 10:18 am on May 21, 2009
i feel like a lonererrr
adam said
at 10:22 am on May 21, 2009
u do care thats the thing
adam said
at 10:27 am on May 21, 2009
U realize all your poems start off happy and turn tough or depressed at the end. Also maybe sometimes you should answer your questions cause it seems like all of them are a poem with no answer
mswilliams said
at 9:04 am on May 22, 2009
hi jazmin! I think you're doing a really nice job with your poems so far. One thing I'll suggest is thinking about rhymes--you have some really good ones that stand out and work really well, but we want to make sure the words we choose to rhyme really fit in the poem, you know? Like in sometimes--"cause a fray"...I dunno just a suggestion. Nice job overall :)!
Jazmin said
at 10:25 am on Jun 1, 2009
... adam.....
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