The Wait
SamanthaTorres
I waited for you
but you never came
and im the one to blame
for pushing away
so that you could not stay
and now that you wont come back
my heart is falling fast into a crack
of darkness
while i sit in sadness
on this cold december day
Forgotten
Samantha Torres
Did you
forget
i was alive?
no but--
but what?
your not what i though
you were
what?
you know what!i was just one of those
weidos
of the street
no your not its just--
that you didnt like me.
and thats ok
now its my time to
shine and that place is not here
what i dont get this at all!
ok ,well maybe you can get this
its my time to go now.
Gabriel
Samantha Torres
That baby
Those eyes
That smile
The walk
That baby talk
That baby
If the most beautiful baby i have ever seen.
Comments (2)
mswilliams said
at 11:39 am on Apr 30, 2009
nice job working on the ends of the lines!
mswilliams said
at 11:30 am on May 27, 2009
i really like the two voice poem!!! i think you can work on making it sound more like poetry. focus on the really important words and delete words that don't do anythig
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